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A new round of the Comment Tag Game! You can find the previous one here along with all of the previous participants' comments.

Do you ever feel like people are only commenting on the first piece they see? Would you like more people to actually look through your gallery? Are you willing to take a look at another deviant's gallery? Then join us for a round of Comment Tag!

Information

:bulletblue: Here is how it works:

Each TagLine will be 7 players long and will have a requirement to start with (for example, "blue") so the first player in the line knows what they are looking for.

:bulletblue: How does a player tag?

Player 1 goes through Player 2's gallery looking for an artwork or literature piece that has something with the starting requirement in it.

Player 1 leaves a comment on the deviation and puts "TAG!" at the bottom of the comment with a new requirement. This is the signal for Player 2 to look through Player 3's gallery for something with the new requirement in it.

Player 2 then comments and leaves a new requirement for player 3.

This goes on all the way through the 7 players. Player 7 leaves a comment for Player 1 and thus completes the TagLine.


Additional Notes:

:bulletblue: Post your TAG (new requirement) as well as the link to the deviation you commented on in the comments on this blog.
FAQ #14: How do I create a link to a specific comment?

:bulletblue: Please try to do your tag within 3 days, or at least notify the admin (CameronKobe) if there are delays.

:bulletblue: Please keep requirements broad and general so that players have a better chance at finding something to comment on. (examples: Blue rather than royal blue. Dress, rather than polkadot dress. Flower instead of Sunflower.)


So what are you waiting for? Just reply to this blog to sign up! :la:

Feel free to ask any questions as well!

FAQ
  • What if you can't find the requirement? Then comment on a random piece and tag the player... the point is that you at least put an effort into looking for the requirement.
  • Can we sign up for more than one TagLine? YES! You have to leave a separate comment each time you want to play again, so that I have an accurate count. It's first come first serve for each TagLine.
  • What do we do if we are the last in line? Find your requirement in player 1's gallery and leave a comment as usual. Instead of tagging the next player, when you comment here with a link to the deviation, please add a Tag and I will use it to begin another line :)





:bulletblue::bulletred::bulletpurple:TAGLINES:bulletyellow::bulletgreen::bulletorange:

Please make sure that comments are as constructive as possible.

Please also note that it may take a while to get to you in the line...we just ask that you do your tag when it's your turn within three days. Thanks!

Happy tagging everyone! :la:
:iconfelladanceplz: (March 27, 2015): Due to the large number of successfully completed taglines in Comment Tag #4, older taglines are now being archived.

:bulletblue::bulletblue::bulletblue: RECENTLY COMPLETED TAGLINES :bulletblue::bulletblue::bulletblue:

:pointr: TAGLINE 10: "Intriguing" :pointl: (Started: March 9, 2015 / Ended: March 17, 2015)
1. Rorelse "Movement" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/3916…
2. ominousbird "Heroic" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/5124…
3. Dianamisu "Love" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/5194…
4. QBeagle "Liquid" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/5135…
5. TigerRose1329 "Shiny" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/4224…
6. SakuraAkuma16 "Light" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/4815…
7. Eleween "Shadow" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/5101…

:pointr: TAGLINE 11: "Shadow"  :pointl: (Started: March 17, 2015 / Ended: March 29, 2015)
1. LaffenART "Brave" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/4627…
2. YumisaR "Passion" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/5154…
3. StudioIJB "Prophesy" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/5140…
4. dviouslecunning "Exquisite" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/5207…
5. Eleween "Jump" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/5203…
6. sheorun "Anger" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/5112…
7. QBeagle "Duality" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/4538…

:pointr: TAGLINE 12: "Duality"  :pointl:  (Started: March 29, 2015 / Ended: April 5, 2015)
1. StudioIJB "Pokemon" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/5175…
2. HoshinoDestiny "Pride" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/5171…
3. TigerRose1329 "Blue" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/2742…
4. RaikanEarthDragon "Graceful" (Tag word set by admin.)
5. DoubleDandE "Hot" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/5027…
6. Cuthillius "Peaceful" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/2644…
7. sheorun "Pride" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/4602…

:pointr: TAGLINE 13: "Pride"  :pointl: (Started: April 8, 2015 / Ended: April 18, 2015)
1. dviouslecunning "Heavy" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/5211…
2. Ellofayne "Shading" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/4953…
3. DTKinetic "Different" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/4809…
4. TigerRose1329 "Splendid" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/4953…
5. LaffenART "Passion" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/4967…
6. lu--24 "Place" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/5266…
7. RyugaSSJ3 "Cool" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/5138…

:bulletred::bulletred::bulletred: ACTIVE TAGLINE :bulletred::bulletred::bulletred:
:pointr: TAGLINE 14: "Cool"  :pointl: (Started: April 26, 2015 / Ongoing)
1. DoubleDandE "Orange" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/4088…
2. SayuYazawa "Calm" :: comments.deviantart.com/1/4755…
3. TheArtfulJellyfish
4. Dianamisu
5. Amorelia
6. ToastedToast15
7. seeker273


:bulletyellow::bulletyellow::bulletyellow: NEXT TAGLINE: :bulletyellow::bulletyellow::bulletyellow:
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:icontheartfuljellyfish:, TheArtfulJellyfish, Varied, Student
Commented on Koaru OC Black/White [REUPLOAD] by Antebelle.

Koaru OC Black/White [REUPLOAD] by Antebelle
"Hey there! Super cool drawing. I love the idea of his hairstyle being reminiscent of a dragon, and I feel like it was fairly well-executed here, but you could do a little more. Maybe having longer, taller spikes in the center to differentiate the mohawk part from the rest of the hair? Also, you seem to have a good grasp on where the strands are going, but not so much where they're coming from. It looks good on the back of the head, but most of the hair at the top seems to be growing out of one straight line. I would suggest looking at people's hair and/or drawings and pay attention to where all the strands originate. This will help it fall more naturally, help you figure out where to place the strands, and the hair will follow the curve of the head better, making it appear less flat. [...]"

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CreativityYou opened your eyes, and there I was. We were both tiny then. I said we could make something beautiful together. You said that sounded like fun. And oh, were you right; it was the most fun you’d ever had in your life.
 
And that was only the beginning.
 
Over the years we grew stronger, bigger. My place in your heart expanded until what was once a trickle became a raging waterfall of colors. I taught you how to see the world through new eyes, and in exchange, you helped me with my wild schemes. We were partners in crime, an inseparable duo. You see, you wouldn’t be you without me, and there would be no me without you. Together we make perfect insanity.
 
Perfection is rare, however, and when granted it’s fleeting. Wherever I go, trouble is sure to follow, and you were no exception. You closed your eyes at night only to find me dancing behind them, making sleep an impossible dream. I haunted your thoughts ceaselessly, and I seeped into your subconscious
Lost by TheArtfulJellyfish Fistbumps by TheArtfulJellyfish
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:iconomnikron13:, Omnikron13, Digital Art, Hobbyist
Commented on Flying High by NichigoTheCat.

Flying High by NichigoTheCat
"The outline work here is pretty spot on, though there seem to be some issues with the front legs/paws. Primarily the left front leg is flexed somewhat awkwardly, and the left front paw doesn't scream 'paw' as much as it should. Not overly major issues, but you might want to take some time studying reference images and feline anatomy of the front legs/paws and doing a few practice sketches to replicate them more accurately within your style.

Your shading, however, is somewhat of a let down, given the quality of the line work. Whereas the line art competently conveys the shape of the subject and texture of the fur, the shading fails to continue in conveying shape & texture. One problem you have here seems to be that your lighting is confused. I think you should take the time to do some studies on light/lighting to bring your skill here up to par with the line art.
[...]"

Here is a selection of art created by Omnikron13.
Outlook by Omnikron13 ANTIculture Imperfect Lovers by Omnikron13 Ladies Night Poster by Omnikron13
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:iconroguemudblood:, RogueMudblood, Literature, Artist
Commented on |KIRI| You Piss Me Off by SnowFlake-Storm.

|KIRI| You Piss Me Off by SnowFlake-Storm
"With respect to the style being "cartoony", yes, you've achieved that very well. This approximates a cartoon style quite well. I do like that you've made certain to make allowance for body curvature in the markings on the animals rather than making then straight lines.

There are some proportional issues I'd like to point out though. Either the foremost paw on the yellow dog is too large, or the one intended to be crossed over is not quite large enough. It appears awkward. You'll also want to consider the shoulder of the yellow dog's arm that is to the left of the frame. I know it's counter-intuitive to leave that curve out of the picture, but you wouldn't see those muscles directly as they're hidden by the fur of the tail he's laying on.
[...]"

Here is a selection of art created by RogueMudblood.
Better On the OutsideBusy people with busy lives
Forgetting to take a moment
To look beyond themselves.
They sit behind red lights,
Honking their horns loudly,
Demanding immediate change.
Never seeing the world
Sitting all around them,
Never taking a moment
To view the rolling clouds.
Single bright bulbs blur,
Becoming one long stream
While the cars buzz rapidly by.
Blinders keep their vision focused
Directly on the road ahead,
Constantly missing the point.
They never see what sits beyond
The windows of their cars.
Myopic vision confined
To the sights they've already seen.
And even though their world
Really makes no sense,
They insist upon keeping it
In exactly the same way.
Slipping their heads in the sand,
They ignore us completely.
They say we're on the outside -
Really, they're the ones without.
Unless they open their eyes,
Everything will always be the same.
FirebrandIn the open air,
His voice echoing loudly -
Words to start a war.
  Is There a Wrong?Disclaimer: I do not own The Shawshank Redemption. I make no profit from this work of fiction.
________________
“Andy, do you ever think that maybe what you're doing is wrong?”
I couldn't help but shake my head. Even while all other movement at the table stopped, I just kept calmly eating my food. Of course we'd been talking about Andy helping the guards with their paperwork. The only time we could talk was when we were eating, and I admit I liked telling stories about how they'd treat Andy just as much as Brooks had done all those years ago.
The fish couldn't keep his mouth shut. “I mean, isn't it a little immoral?”
It never ceased to amaze me how the new fish would speak at the wrong moment. Of course, Andy hadn't been much different in the beginning, and he treated this fish a lot more politely than Haywood had treated him.
“Well, what would you do?”
Looking around, I saw the others smiling. We did our best not to say anything or laugh. Let

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Literature: Power Rangers Mighty Megaforce fan-fic ideaSo I was watching Dragonball Z Majin Vegeta clips and the MMPR Wedding 3 parter when I thought of an idea for my Power Rangers Mighty Megaforce fan-fic.
It would also be inspired by the likes of Dragonball Z Return of Cooler and the Majin Vegeta parts after he gets infuriated by Gohan and Goku's behaviour.
So the story begins when all of the Pirate Rangers were fighting in the Season 1 of MMPR and when Rita unleashes her Fanman monster and pulls a Sonic Archie Comic's Genesis Wave on 'em,they get sent to other parts of the MMPR timeline,Keila and Iczer where sent to the Wedding saga of all things when Rita returns to make Zedd her husband for life. At this point,you already know what the story is about but what you did not know is that Keila was fighting the Silent Knight at the time,a re-occurring character who will appear in the Ninja Morphin' Power Ranger Saga a.k.a MMAR if you people recall the Aquatians. Iczer happens to find them both and kicks Silent Knight's ass and he retreats
A Blinding Sky“Hey.”
“What?”
“... Why is the sky blue?”
Trip looked up, following Ares’ gaze. “Good point. It is blue.”
“Why isn’t it orange, like normal?”
Trip frowned. “I don’t know.”
Something shuffled in the undergrowth nearby. The two friends swept around, their feet swishing through the fallen rembranch leaves as they stared at the bush from where the sudden shaking had emanated.
“Is someone there?”
Ares glanced at Trip, trying to hide any unease. Trip took a gentle step towards the bush, his arms slightly raised as he tried to keep his balance. Despite his attempted deftness, the leaves underfoot betrayed his movements. He gently moved closer. The bush stayed still. Ares squinted, trying to see if anything was behind it from where she was stood. It was very still indeed. Almost… too still.
Trip was now close enough to the bush to smell the fragrance of its palma flowers. His tail flicke
Heart's DesireI'd love to be a biker
racing on a black and silver Harley Davidson
adorned with fuchsia flames,
my grip tightening on the handlebars as I tear down the highway
past dunes of rocky sand dotted with brown and green sagebrush,
my hair rippling behind me like a cape in the western wind.
I'd wear a jacket made of the finest black leather,
sleek knee-length boots with shining silver buckles and pointed toes
sharp enough to cut diamond,
dark-wash skinny jeans, hearts on thick silver chains
around my neck and wrist, and my favorite T-shirt:
white with a heart painted on the chest
in Italian green, white, and red.
The sound of adventure is the powerful, pulsing thrum of the motor
as I ride towards the sunset,
the lofty Sierra Nevadas black against the chili-red sky.
I'd follow the road wherever it leads me,
trails of saffron fire blazing in my wake,
clouds of dust and gauzy steam curling over the asphalt.
11 March 2013
ANGELIC Chapter 5
    The next day was spent with the two begrudging roommates doing their own separate activities in an attempt to distract themselves from the circumstances that stuck them together. The girl spent her time finishing up her new room, mostly just wiping the drawer clean of dust, and filling it up with her clothes. The room had become pitch black the night before, so she searched for any sort of electrical outlet in the room or bathroom when she had woken up from another restless sleep. After coming up with nothing, she had to settle for the window being her only source of light, and using a flashlight for whenever she was going to traverse the stairs during nighttime.
    Having finished settling in into her new bedroom, there wasn't much else she could do except hang out on the balcony when it wasn't occupied by Wrath. The following day, she h
Guardians: The Awakening - PrologueWhen she was young, it hadn’t been like this – cities and business and busyness – it had been empty and remote, the wind whispered secrets to her through the tree branches in the night and there wasn’t just one world but many, overlapping and coalescing into reality after reality for her.
“Ye can hear ‘em, Kathy, can’t ye?” her grandmother would hiss, her darting eyes flicking around the barn kitchen, bright and knowing. The whole family – Kath, parents, brother, grandmother – clustered around the rough old wooden table, throwback to who-knew-when. Her father – bored – drank overstewed tea from chipped china, and her brother fidgeted with a puzzle. Only Kath was really listening, and she pulled her chair closer to her gran’s.
“Don’t upset her, mother,” and that had been Kath’s own mother, wringing her hands nervously, too afraid to pull her child away; too afraid to let her stay.
The Beast and the Businessman (edited)John drifted in an immense void, unable to control where he was going. He doubted anyone knew he was alive.
Not long ago he had been a traveler. An astronaut, or so he would have been called in another time, but in his time such things were more common and words like “astronaut” seemed unnecessary. He had been moving with his family to another part of the galaxy. They were being transported through space, moving thousands of light years of space to reach a new home on a distant planet.
One morning he had attended a briefing on safety drills, along with the rest of his family. These were held regularly on board the ship to ensure everyone was ready in case of disaster. The first drill was always to get a protective suit on.
An instructor had stood in front of his family, demonstrating how the pieces of the suit fit onto the body.  “Alright,” he said “everyone just go through the motions, then check the person beside you.”
John began to put his ow
Inheritance, Part oneOne step in front of the other, one step after another. Marching helplessly down into the dark, I can't even see the stair in the blackness but my feet find them anyway. I would scream and curse, but I know that there is something at the bottom of these endless steps and maybe if I am quiet it won't notice me.  With no one in the dark to see me, I am weak. Tears course down my cheek, though I am silent. The hooded man's robes bore a symbol I had only heard described in whispers. And the bones... the bones that moved and danced and clattered. The sand spilling from them as they rose to enfold me. I don't know where he has taken me but I know I might be lucky to merely die.
Then I nearly fall when the stair flatten out. The spell catches me and forces me back to my feet and I advance into a room lit by by flames floating above pools of wax, the candle's fire remaining in place after the candle has burned away. Dust billows at my feet and I start to shiver though the air is oven hot.
The Origins of the 'links''The First Kingdoms'
It all started off in the game 'Ocarina of Time', The Great Warping was an event in which Ganondorf, using dark magical powers and being aided by certain villainous individuals, had pulled kingdoms from an entirely different world, that world, was Earth, in it's current time period of the Medieval Ages. In doing so, he had effectively pulled England, France, and many other warring kingdoms, and spread them along Hyrule's borders and even among the sea.The new, foreign kingdoms and the confusion that ensues soon pulls Hyrule into their conflicts, and with Hyrule's hands full with the new foreigners, they were more than distracted and would easily allow Ganondorf to gain power and usurp Hyrule's throne.
But not all is lost, in an act which can only be explained as divine intervention from the Goddesses, a few chosen boys of the kingdoms would be molded into the Hero's, Link's, own physical form. In doing so, it will be a lot much easier for Link to know who's
Sandy The Unicorn [Sandy]Sandy.
The name evokes a sense of happiness and responsibility in the young male unicorn.
The last autumn leaf on a tree leaves its stem behind. Aben follows with his eyes the lone leaf dancing silently in the gentle breeze. It swirled and twirled and whirled around before touching down gracefully on the immaculately bare water surface. Like a ballerina spinning round and round, the leaf drew oval ripples that spread out over the lake, decorating it with beautiful lineart.
The ripples swiftly found their way to the unicorn's leg, which raised itself upwards without warning, scattering diamond droplets of water all over the approaching ripples, disrupting them.
Aben thought and thought. "You are Sandy, dear leaf," he spoke, in a smooth, passionate voice. "She is graceful, just like you, and stunning to watch, in whatever she does.
Your ripples are the power that she has to influence others. Likewise, my water droplets are my power that influences her."
He sighed, deeply. His eyel

Digital: Raptor by KPS-Cackle witch and familiar by Amorelia Before and Now: Tombolcat by Phantom-P1
Fan Art: Out of Ashes  by MelodiosNachtlich Moon Guardian by VeeVeeTheRolepayer What should have happened - MMPR Sega CD cutscene by RyugaSSJ3
Traditional: This needs a Dragon by DracoDesigns Blarg by DracoDesigns Lydia? by amazingmle11
Mixture: Sorry about this,Ankh by RyugaSSJ3 Days of Yore - Ch1 Page31 by Zarashi99

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ProjectComment is a Group that provides Guaranteed & Constructive comments for the DeviantArt community.

In order to support those efforts, we encourage dedicated users to give comments too. For those who are critics, artists, or just helpful in the community, we now offer something in return for all that you do - be it helping the participants of ProjectComment, or the group itself!

This weekly article focuses on the amazing deviants in the DeviantArt community, who have given fantastic comments, through excerpts of those comments, artwork by the deviants themselves, and much more! Your support in :+fav: the article would be much appreciated. :heart:



Spotlight Commenters

These commenters are determined by you through Nominations (read below for more information). Each month, we will be selecting a couple of amazing commenters based on the comments we have seen in our gallery submissions and elsewhere on DeviantArt. Anyone on DeviantArt is applicable for this feature!

:iconravenotaktay:, RavenOtaktay, Digital Art, Hobbyist
Commented on Asleep by saiyron.

Asleep by saiyron
"I like the characters design, s/he looks interesting and looks like she could tell a few good stories. Her/him hair is well shaded/highlighted and I like that it matches the bedsheets. I am not sure if s/he was mean to be realistic or if that is just the look of the character, but I fell some of her/him dimensions look a little off to me. For example, the character is drawn as if s/he is raised of the bed, but to me, if s/he was asleep, then the body wouldn't be supported and they would fall flat. Therefore, the shoulders look strange to me. If you are going for a realistic look, I feel the head is too short. I also feel the pillow is in the wrong place or wrong size, as s/he looks uncomfortable. [...]"

Here is a selection of art created by RavenOtaktay.
The Cat Exibit by RavenOtaktay Forest Fairy by RavenOtaktay The Gallery by RavenOtaktay
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:iconashfiremage:, AshfireMage, Digital Art, Hobbyist
Commented on Clashing Kinsmen by Celesol.

Clashing Kinsmen by Celesol
"I love the concept of this piece, as well as the wonderful job you did coloring it! There's so many kinds of half-human anthros out there, it's cool to see a couple of them together.

Things I liked: Like I said, your coloring is really nice. I envy your ability to get such detailed shading out of markers! The hair and background especially are quite nice. You mentioned trying to differentiate the two characters, and that also worked very well. They're distinctive while still being in the same art style. Your inking is also very nicely done

Things that could use some work: The composition is a little stiff and awkward. The centaur in particular should be putting her body into her action more, she doesn't look very invested in that sword thrust. Also, her torso looks a little outsized for her deer body.
[...]"

Here is a selection of art created by AshfireMage.
Sunlight and Shadow by AshfireMage Broken Wings by AshfireMage My First Commission! by AshfireMage
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:iconkinkostfur:, Kinkostfur, Deviant Member
Commented on Draft Screenshot 3 by champignonkinoko.

Draft Screenshot 3 by champignonkinoko
"1) It's just a matter of taste, but I find lower half of her face to be disturbing. Well... his as well. She, I guess the upper righ part of her hair looks as if her head had a huuge bump there (I kind of cannot put it into words). His - I guess I would shift his eyes/nose/lips to the right. Or right part of his face-contour to left. Whatever.
2) You might wish to add a bit of hard, contrast light to that vest of his. It looks like it was designed as those sleek and shiny thingies, but looks matt instead.
3) The way you draw hair just irks me. It's a pure matter of taste as well, but while her hair looks just fine, every single one of his spikes looks too pronounced. I guess I wouldn't meant it, if the lower-left part was a bit darker of a shade, but the way it is, it looses the 3D effect for me.
[...]"

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:iconretsamys:, RetSamys, Varied, Hobbyist
Commented on The Gardener by aureateSUN.

The Gardener by aureateSUN
"Yellow on blue seems to be a combination that works really well no matter where I see it. I really need to remember that.
Your painting is obviously very good. I don't see any flaws, considering the medium. There are some parts where the yellow and the blue mix to a shade of green, but that's a very minor thing.

And it all works so well together! The smoother drawing and painting in the front and the more abstract background. The shades of blue. The yellow spots glowing on the darker background.
Well, maybe there could have been some gradient change from the smooth foreground into the background by becoming more and more abstract, in the yellow atmosphere maybe. And it might also look weirdly cropped: The comet is a bit too far on the left, but not enough to look significant.
[...]"

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:iconellofayne:, Ellofayne, Traditional Art, Hobbyist
Commented on Unwanted Pursuer by apples-ishness

Unwanted Pursuer by apples-ishness
"The rocks and the water looks fantastic. Your wolf especially as well, I love the way the fur is rendered. Its anatomy looks fine to me, you could draw it again and again this way and I think it would be beautiful :heart: But what I notice is a sense of less complexity as you go up the piece. The whole bottom looks great, and even the grass is beautifully colored and looks very realistic. The trees and sky it drops off. I saw other people were saying that too, so sorry I'm just repeating and not really offering any extra feedback... =/ The sky would even be fine, I think, if it weren't for the trees. Some clouds could add a lot, and making a second row of trees behind what you have. I don't think its so much their shading/ blurring, but they are just a row of 8 trees that you can see the sky through the edges. To my eyes this implies some sparse trees.... there is no illusion that there is more than 8. So adding some "behind" the row, as in taking away some of the sky you can see between them I think would help. That, and giving them some variation. Maybe some branches, some different heights.... maybe one is so tall you can't see the leaves on it, etc. [...]"

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:icontoddntheshiningsword:, ToddNTheShiningSword, Traditional Art, Hobbyist
Commented on Money Talks by Malfey.

Money Talks by Malfey
"I like the message and how you conveyed it. I also appreciated reading how you did not just single out rich people for this. We can all theoretically be this way.
Usually, I think, though, the large amount of money only makes you more destructive because it's a multiplier. Like... the amount of destruction one person causes actually equals their lifestyle multiplied times their income. A rich person and a poor person can actually both have similarly destructive, short-sighted lifestyles with regards to helping others or destroying the environment, but the richer person's damage is much greater only because they have more money to do it with. I wonder if there could be a way you theoretically could have worked that into the picture? Probably no way that would not have cluttered it and ruined it or made it confusing...
[...]"

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Tokyo Mew Mew? by sutoroberikurimu Bruno X/Heather: Azentenza Island (Chapter 1)This is a snippet to a project that I have been working on for 14 years. It's something that means a lot to me, and I'm very nervous about sharing amongst the Interwebs. I would really like your feedback, so please bear with me as this is an incredibly rough draft to a really long story. If you want to use any material, please ask me first.
Chapter 1: Beginning with a Reset
The year is 500 Septillion B.C.E...
We see an island covered by clouds and the waters are calm. The trees are filled with life and the sky is as clear as the finest silverware. We pass the trees to a vast city, with buildings made of gold with bronze outlines, and some that even try to reach the heavens. The citizens of this island are known as the Equinox, the Guardians of Time to ensure the lineage vortex remains stable. They are able to repair paradoxes, but they are not to ever interfere with the lineage, for it would bring dire consequences.
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