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almost like suicidethe stars
are
twinkling
and
winking
at my
dancing
frame
and
laughing
mouth
that
couldn't
possibly
form
coherent
words.
my heart
is
leaping
out into
the
street
because
baby
being
with you
is like
suicide.
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The sky in which I fly
The rock that keeps me steady,
All through an endless night
The joy that keeps me singing,
And the smile upon my face
You are the peace that fills me,
With a sense of grace
You are the rivers I swim,
The mountains that I climb,
And with you I will stay for all time!
You are my world,
You are my life
You are the person that I turn to,
When I can't sleep at night
You are my voice, you sing,
Yes, you are all these things,
You are my world,
You are my life
You are the vision of beauty,
I see when I'm awake
And to you I will hold on,
No matter what it takes
You are the truth inside me,
No matter how much I deny
You always stand to guide me,
No matter how far I run to hide
You are my heart and my soul,
I don't want to let go!
You are my world,
You are my life
You are the person that I turn to,
When nothing else feels right
You ease my suffering,
Yes, you are all these things,
You are my world,
You are my life
You are the future staring,
Me
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9: Sadness and ComfortHe sat down on my right hand side, both of us just sitting there on the desk.
This kind stitchpunk who had lost his eye during the war fiddled with his copper hands, made by the scientist who made all nine of them, including my little brother, 6.
"1… Talked about you…" the doll spoke, having difficulty speaking. What did 1 talk about that involved me? I let him continue. "He… He…" he sighed and rubbed his forehead.
"5… What did he say?" I felt like something had a cold grip at the core of my chest as I sought out my question's answer. I placed my hand on his shoulder, giving him a comforting smile.
"He's thinking of… making 8 take you to the Emptiness… For the Beast…"
I looked at him with a mixture of disbelief and worry. "He… what?"
"He's going to make 8 take you away and leave you for the Beast to take, so it will leave us in peace." He held my hands, his cold metal fingers holding my own. Mine delicate in comparison.
"He's wron
.21+ Death of a PhoenixShe writhed in agony at the burning in her chest. Pain, spreading through her body like poison. Her lungs convulsed as they filled with fluid and she lurched up to force the blood from her throat.
"Strife!" that smooth and deep voice she knew ever so well cried out.
Her eyes fluttered open as she managed to muster the strength to turn her head to the side. Though her vision was blurred by the fog of her approaching end, she could still see his figure running toward her in desperation. She closed her eyes, choking once more on her rich blood.
He leaped a tiny bit and landed purposely on both knees, sliding slightly as he reached her weak body.
"Strife," he repeated, lifting her into his grasp. "What have you done?"
"What does it look like?" she asked, her voice filled with sarcasm. "I won." He pulled his eyes away from her for t
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